GXP and paradise war translation updates/discussion

Started by Eff Efferson, May 07, 2018, 11:12:38 AM

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TRY NOT TO CUT YOUR SELF ON THE EXTREME EDGE OF THIS CHAPTER
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literally the only mention of the first fleet commander ever since kamidake onsen 5
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Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 11, 2018, 08:04:34 PM
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"THEN WHY DID YOU USE MR. SLIMEY  #3' ..."
   in Amane's temple, a blood vessel was emerging clearly.
  "Oh, why Amane  do you want me to show  Seina the video i took of you being analysed by it? you looked stunning in it."
   she took video partially to keep them from doing anything to her and partially because she wanted to, and also
  (one day I have to remember to give seina a copy as a gift)

I wonder if she used the same camera which she secretly filmed Ryoko trapped alone crying in her lab overnight with that one time.

Quote from: Kuugen on June 12, 2018, 12:28:40 PM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 11, 2018, 08:04:34 PM
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"THEN WHY DID YOU USE MR. SLIMEY  #3' ..."
   in Amane's temple, a blood vessel was emerging clearly.
  "Oh, why Amane  do you want me to show  Seina the video i took of you being analysed by it? you looked stunning in it."
   she took video partially to keep them from doing anything to her and partially because she wanted to, and also
  (one day I have to remember to give seina a copy as a gift)

I wonder if she used the same camera which she secretly filmed Ryoko trapped alone crying in her lab overnight with that one time.

haha i think so too
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http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-18.html?m=1

almost done with 9 just like 4 more chapters to go but im being very slow about it. very busy lately.
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Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 15, 2018, 03:51:11 AM
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almost done with 9 just like 4 more chapters to go but im being very slow about it. very busy lately.

Thanks, some minor nitpicks:
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"Go home, Onii-chan, Fuku-chan"

"Welcome(?) home, Onii-chan, Fuku-chan"

"Hey, if your not doing anything, we should play gether too."

"Hey, if your not doing anything, we should play together too."
A very fun chapter, I pictured Seina piloting ZINV to battle a giant Fuku-zilla rising out from the ocean of Tokyo bay.

Quote from: Kuugen on June 16, 2018, 08:26:43 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 15, 2018, 03:51:11 AM
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almost done with 9 just like 4 more chapters to go but im being very slow about it. very busy lately.

Thanks, some minor nitpicks:
Quote
"Go home, Onii-chan, Fuku-chan"

"Welcome(?) home, Onii-chan, Fuku-chan"

"Hey, if your not doing anything, we should play gether too."

"Hey, if your not doing anything, we should play together too."
A very fun chapter, I pictured Seina piloting ZINV to battle a giant Fuku-zilla rising out from the ocean of Tokyo bay.


thanks for the feedback. ill go back and fix it really quick to orrow. once i am done with all the chapters im going to head back and proofread and fix up the formatting for gxp 6 7 8 and 9
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http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/paradise-war-chapter-1-part-4.html


so is anyone interested in more of paradise war now that episode 1 is done?
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Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 17, 2018, 06:36:04 AM
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fuku and ryo go on a road trip

  "good. well at least every one's safe  this time...."
  "Don't worry I have been watching over them"
   Suddenly, Washu dissolved her optical camouflage to reveal her walking around with a camera.
  "Waaaaa Washu-chan?"
  "Hhuhuhu! I'm titling this"a walk to find your master"! guhuhuhuhu! I was able to take such good footage."
   Washu issued a V sign with a full smile.


Again, that camera...

Quote from: Kuugen on June 17, 2018, 11:48:00 AM
Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 17, 2018, 06:36:04 AM
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fuku and ryo go on a road trip

  "good. well at least every one's safe  this time...."
  "Don't worry I have been watching over them"
   Suddenly, Washu dissolved her optical camouflage to reveal her walking around with a camera.
  "Waaaaa Washu-chan?"
  "Hhuhuhu! I'm titling this"a walk to find your master"! guhuhuhuhu! I was able to take such good footage."
   Washu issued a V sign with a full smile.


Again, that camera...

I wonder where she got it from... how long has she had it... do you think she keeps her videos backed up in the cloud lol
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Quote from: Fap_fapperson on June 17, 2018, 03:59:43 AM
so is anyone interested in more of paradise war now that episode 1 is done?

I am! Sorry I'm not caught up with all your translation work, but I will be!

Finally gonna start catching up to the translated novels

Really appreciate the work fapperson

http://tenchimuyotranslationblog.blogspot.com/2018/06/gxp-9-chapter-16.html
Mihoshi get's scolded
Mitoto get's scolded
tenchi scolds some chicken in a hotpot
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GXP 9 chapters 7-8 when? Can't wait for GXP 10 - 14 to be finished as well
Also, Is GXP 14 completed? The page looked like it's still not yet completed :rad: